I called our FR5 block-loading trial easy in my first write-up. The demonstrator prepared the tray and program. I mainly followed the sequence. How do I correct that without discarding my useful impressions?
Say what you actually did, because easy to follow and easy to build are two very different compliments; did you get through a tray without the demonstrator stepping in?
Then that belongs near the top, not hidden under the photographs; I'd still be interested in how you found the screen and whether his explanation made sense
The sequence screen was clear to me after his explanation. I have changed easy to a description of that assisted run. The setup and changeover work are now listed as things I did not try.
The current step stayed visible beside the next expected action. I did not need to remember his whole explanation at once. I have added that detail, thank you.
That's the sort of thing I'd read a first impression for; you don't need to turn it into a commissioning report to have noticed something worth telling us