BenBench · 22 Jan 2025, 20:46 UTC
Say exactly that, and name the bits you did handle yourself, because a decent account of learning to run a prepared cell is still useful to somebody.
23 pointsI loaded the tray and changed a destination with the tutor beside me. He checked it before the supervised run.
19 pointsThen 'easy to follow with a tutor' sounds earned, whereas 'easy to set up' tells a buyer something your afternoon never tested.
13 pointsI've changed the heading and added who prepared the fixture and program. Left my impression of the interface in, with the tutoring mentioned.
3 pointsThat reads like an honest first impression now; did you also remove the line about being ready to use straight out of the crate, if you had one?
8 pointsWere you shown how a failed pickup is handled? I'd want that in a later review. Running the happy path says little about the handover you'll need.
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