I enjoyed our supervised FR10 spacer trial and wrote that I had the job running quickly. Reading it again, I can see why someone would think I set up the job. I did not. The demonstrator had prepared the trays, fitted the tool and loaded the program before I arrived.
I used the prepared exercise and asked questions while he stayed beside me. It still felt approachable, but my review has made somebody else's preparation disappear. I want to correct that without pretending I disliked the afternoon.
I refilled one after he showed me the orientation. He checked it before we continued. That probably belongs in the correction too, rather than just saying I loaded parts.
It does. I like reviews that tell me what help was available when something looked uncertain. 'Easy' with an expert at your shoulder is a useful experience, just not the same one as being left to run a workshop.
Daniel, don't make him responsible for testing an entire workshop in an afternoon. The useful correction is the scope of his experience, not a list of every test he didn't do
I'm not asking for more tests, HazelBell. I mean readers should know he could ask the person who built the exercise. Noah already describes that clearly here.
Keep that description near the original quick-start sentence, Noah. People skim. A correction buried below the nice photographs won't reach the same readers.
Anna, he selected the demonstration spacers beforehand. I don't know what he excluded. Felix, I'm replacing the quick-start sentence itself and adding the preparation immediately after it.
That selection matters more to me than whether the tool fitting took ten minutes or longer. I want to know whether my own pile of parts resembles what you handled.
I put a spacer in the wrong way during the refill. He spotted it in his check and explained the orientation again. I'd left it out because I thought it was just me being new, but it shows the help quite well.
Revised now. I describe using his prepared job, my checked refill and the uncertain preparation time. I removed the claim that I'd set the job up myself. The positive impression stays.